WRITE AN ESSAY
Take into account topics that you learnt in class.
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WRITERS
1. LINDA ROJAS 1001 JT
Spirituality
Why do I like dance? Where would like to travel? What I didn't feel butterflies, l felt safe is a beautiful way to know how when can be surrounded by beautiful things like nature and animals, there is an universal law called the law of attraction with is a universal law called the law of attraction with it way can dream things that you want and you know why the universe does not give them for example: something positive if you like a house; if all you see negatively, if you think about being sick the universe says ok, little by little diseases are going to kill you, it's a weird way of explaining but when you use it completely, you understand we are energy and energy attracts things; it is nice to feel it.
2. MAHILER LEGUIZAMON 1002
OTHER WAY TO WIN
My opinion about soccer is a life way, soccer gives me many things, for example, admiration, respect and solve problems, I always solve some situations playing, by other hand I show my talent, soccer for me is one of the most important things now. I admire this sport because my dad is a good example and my great admiration.
The admiration of my parents led me to success since I feel motivated and that motivation becomes my happiness and the most important thing is that my parents are always proud of my.
IT IS IMPORTANT THAT THE ADMIRATION OF MY PARENTS LEAD ME TO WIN.
2. MIGUEL ANGEL ALZATE 1001 JT
Rap music
I think that music (Hip hop) is very undervalued since, due to different opinions of several people, they think that music is from thugs or gang members because of the bad reputation that has several Colombian and American artists of this culture called rappers and / or Rappers. They are criticized, and they think that it is because of them that society is the way it is apart, it is not like that, only that people can come to hate it because they do not understand that it is the only musical genre that tells the truth without screens, that is, they are not indirect, they tell everything as it is and as it happens in this society Because I prefer this more than other musical genres.
I prefer it since it is part of the only musical genres that I have heard that do not talk about how to make love to a woman and do not talk about women discriminating against them or treating them like a sexual object and like many of them who don't like it they say he talks about drugs, but it's true but at the same time not some rappers say of course they are bad, but they prefer marijuana to cigarettes but not excessively because if that is bad they do not induce them to take drugs they just prefer to drug us with its good music.
Some examples of this good music would be called the old guard rappers who represented rap in their time, relieving the stress of having to listen some parents grew up listening to this genre of reggae, such as some artists (Gotas De Rap, La Etnia, Los Nandez, Alcolirykoz) Or from other countries, it would be a Example (Ice Cube, SnoopDogg, Eazy-E, TuPac, 50 Cent, Dr Dre) But not all are Singers There are also Several Who enjoy only the Beats of the song (BeatMakers)


